My Mother; My Priceless Diamond

anikys3reasurePosted for Everyone to comment on, 5 years ago2 min read

Hi Whales.
Now I want to start learning how to write poem. This is a short poem for my mum. Rate it to encourage me.

My Mother
My love
My heartbeat
My first god
My priceless diamond
My world
My Jannah

The first person I met in this whole wide world
she loved me as a stranger unconditionally
she wants me alive for every reason
she's concerned about me day and night

I came into this world for her to care for
I paid her not a penny
I cry, she gets worried
I smile, she feels happy
Sleepless where I am
Hungry when am hungry
Sick when am sick
I gave her a million troubles
Thousands of stress
Hundreds of worries
Teaching me to understand life
But yet, the love grows daily

A heart full of my thoughts even more than myself
Filled with joy as I grow gradually
She can't even stand seeing my tears

She started the whole stress of building a cathedral(me).
She invested her time in my life
She invested her money not minding the return
Without a second thought of whether am gonna yield a meaningful return
She's done everything to make sure I become somebody in life
She's very positive about my success
The only person that want me greater than herself.

I love you is an understatement to my diamond
I can't wait to build her a mansion
I can't wait to make her shed tears of joy.
I can't wait to make her proud.
She is my mother, My diamond.

I am #thesavagerybeaster
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291 word count

I remain Bee :bee:

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