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i want to see you smile. surprise inside

frenklakePosted for Everyone to comment on, 5 years ago

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the surprise...., i will tell you when you get the end of my poem.

i want to see you smile. by @frenklake


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end of my poem.

no need to praise me on my mad poetic skills.
i have earned them by doodling around and still

wait till you hear my other poems,
the famous.
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want
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also a worthy mention is.
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i...
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no need for, all those applauses...
i just shared a little bit of what i have inside.

the picture is for you.
if you wondered what the surprise was.

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