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Life Lessons - Fifty Word Story Contest

tezmelPosted for Everyone to comment on, 5 years ago

This an entry to @gonzo's fifty worded stories which to most story-tellers like me is a challenge. We love making use of words and telling a story with fifty words alone seems like an uphill task but here goes.


Life Lessons...

One of the young girls housed at the juvenile facility sprung from their eager small crowd rushed towards the visiting parents crying with her arms spread wide then fell a few feet from them...

'Forgive me, Mama! Please... As her mother collected her from her knees with a loving embrace.


Pixabay.

I have never edited something this short that many times... Share your thoughts, please :)

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